Score: 5

"Here's some tips"

submission: Lucky(Unlucky) - Suicide

date: May 2, 2008

1. I like how the stick figures head wasn't coloured in, but when the knife skewers his head it just doesn't look good. Try coloring him in white and see if it looks a bit better.

2. Nice walk cycle, the only complaint I have there is that his back-stride didn't match up with his slow speed - but that doesn't really matter.

3. The trampoline didn't react when he hit it. Even small things like that can make a huge difference.

4. Try some dramatic music instead of waves passing by. I can see this as a big dramatic scene, followed by a record scratch when he hits the trampoline, and then maybe something even more random than a knife.

Anyway, keep practicing. Try adding some more atmosphere and length.

Score: 10

"I see what you did there."

submission: Free Sample

date: March 6, 2008

Well, your art is good - as usual - I still think you need a tablet though.

The audio wasn't bad - a bit distancey but not bad.

The only thing that could have been better is when the fat guy knocks the tray out of his hands, it just doesn't have that... KERPOW aspect to it. Add a sound effect and a blur to it maybe?

Anyway, good job. NOW MAKE MOAR.

Score: 5

"Interesting"

submission: Magic -

date: March 6, 2008

Well, I can see you're (I'm guessing) new to flash - but not all that bad. The character is... Cute, but I think you could have done more with him. A tuxedo maybe? Something to make it more... Original.

Your movement is fairly well done, the main thing that would have made this better is music and better magic effects. Instead of just yellow squiggly lines try experimenting with some blur and glow filters. As for the music, something calm and relaxing would do this great justice.

Score: 10

"Genius!"

submission: Hunt of the Shoopacabra

date: February 11, 2008

I saw the preview you had of this a few months back - actually I was just thinking of that about about an hour ago... Weird. Anyway, brilliant! Very smooth, and an original twist to the Madness series.

I also lol'd when Dad made an appearance - bravo.

Score: 5

"One main thing."

submission: Warrior RPG (beta)

date: February 2, 2008

Battle sequences. If you keep what you have here, but add some sort of graphics to the fighting, you will have something very good. Even something easy, like a Pokemon-style set up would work.

Also add some music, increase the map size, and make it so that you don't restart in the town after every battle..

Score: 10

"ENCORE!"

submission: The Nut Job (part 1)

date: January 16, 2008

Brilliance! Brilliance I say! Your talent is simply astounding, well done on the animation! I laughed at the subliminal jokes (like the murder scene outline in the street), and lol'd at the Invader Zim reference - and I hardly ever laugh at flashes anymore. Keep up what your doing.

Again genius! I can't wait for part two.

Score: 8

"Intriguing."

submission: P90man 1

date: January 16, 2008

I don't usually like Madness flashes outside of Dad or Krinkles, but this was actually interesting. I like how you didn't add music - yet still used sound effects. Usually it's an overload of music and sound or none at all - and what you have here is a perfect balance between them.

Your animation is very smooth, I liked the text as well... for some reason.

Anyway I hope you do continue with this. Good job.

Score: 10

"Brilliant!"

submission: selectiveExposure

date: January 16, 2008

Very original, very simple, very fun. Nothing overly complicated or drastic. The music is perfect, the colour scheme even, is perfect. Nice and smooth transitions... In short, this game is awesome. I hope to see more games from you.

Score: 8

"Mesmerizing."

submission: the man

date: January 15, 2008

I don't know what it is about this flash, but I liked it. Very peacefully and tranquil, kind of funny, no real plot but still attention-holding.

Your FBF skills are excellent, keep it up.

This flash is the salt, the music was the pepper, good job with that.

Make more, this is a welcomed change from the random bloody violence and whatnot I see here on NG every day.

Score: 5

"Well... Umm... Odd, for sure."

submission: Psilocybin

date: January 14, 2008

At first I thought this flash was going nowhere, especially when the...thing with five legs showed up. But once if flashed the cop, that was just prime. Well done, sir. What you lack in artistic ability you certainly make up for in atmospheric judgement (the music was perfect, and the blank face made it all the better). I like the replay screen too - work on your art a bit and I think you could make something truly... Creepy.