Score: 8

"I don't even know what to say."

submission: pokerap masturbation

date: September 10, 2009

The only negative thing I could say about this flash would be that the drawings lacked a bit and looked sloppy. But looking back I actually think that made it funnier. Don't get me wrong, the art was fantastic. I just mean sloppy in the sense that the brush was jagged instead of smoothed over.

The frame rate could be boosted up a bit, and the animation a tad smoother; but other than that this flash was glorious.

I have to hand it to you though, I admire how you did the entire rap rather than just a segment; and I enjoyed your drawings of each Pokemon very much.

Keep up the good work.

Score: 8

"Glorious."

submission: Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]

date: May 7, 2009

The blatant fanboyism that's plaguing your score makes it even better, in a sad way.

Regardless, this was a very well done flash. The art (when the joke wasn't focused on a bad art style) was extremely well done, and the animation itself was smooth and humorous. Not to mention the excellent voice acting on all your parts.

What really made me chuckle, however, was the expressions in just about every segment, so well done to all of you.

Keep it up.

Score: 8

"Marvelous"

submission: Perspective Tutorial .

date: March 31, 2009

This may be the greatest perspective tutorial I've ever seen. It's small, but that's not a bad thing.

Your explanations are to the point and simple, and the atmosphere of the tutorial is very simple and not too flashy or distracting. Also the 3d model was genius and original.

I actually learned something here - thank you! This is going to show in my next flash for sure.

Score: 6

"I don't even know what to say."

submission: Walmart Siblings

date: January 27, 2009

Every now and again you come across a flash that is just so... Out there. So strange that you just have to like it. Even if there's no plot, or anything.

This is defiantly one of those flashes.

The animation was choppy, yet I feel that the un-eaven sketchy... ness is what really put the "what the Hell" factor in here.

Not to mention the audio. The squeals, fuzz, and random spikes of sound truly gives this flash an atmosphere of which there is no other.

The characters even, with the huge hair and just the overall way you drew them fit in perfectly, as well as the use of real images for the horses.

Keep it up.

Score: 3

"Not bad for one hour"

submission: Kirby Training

date: August 6, 2008

... but imagine what you could do in five? Or seven? Or even a week?

Your animation isn't bad, you have potential. All you need is more time put in.

Add some length, of course, and maybe an opponent? A lot of sound effects always makes physical stuff appeal a lot better too. And get rid of the audio, or change it to an actual song (Like a Kirby level).

Score: 5

"Here's some tips"

submission: Lucky(Unlucky) - Suicide

date: May 2, 2008

1. I like how the stick figures head wasn't coloured in, but when the knife skewers his head it just doesn't look good. Try coloring him in white and see if it looks a bit better.

2. Nice walk cycle, the only complaint I have there is that his back-stride didn't match up with his slow speed - but that doesn't really matter.

3. The trampoline didn't react when he hit it. Even small things like that can make a huge difference.

4. Try some dramatic music instead of waves passing by. I can see this as a big dramatic scene, followed by a record scratch when he hits the trampoline, and then maybe something even more random than a knife.

Anyway, keep practicing. Try adding some more atmosphere and length.

Score: 10

"I see what you did there."

submission: Free Sample

date: March 6, 2008

Well, your art is good - as usual - I still think you need a tablet though.

The audio wasn't bad - a bit distancey but not bad.

The only thing that could have been better is when the fat guy knocks the tray out of his hands, it just doesn't have that... KERPOW aspect to it. Add a sound effect and a blur to it maybe?

Anyway, good job. NOW MAKE MOAR.

Score: 5

"Interesting"

submission: Magic -

date: March 6, 2008

Well, I can see you're (I'm guessing) new to flash - but not all that bad. The character is... Cute, but I think you could have done more with him. A tuxedo maybe? Something to make it more... Original.

Your movement is fairly well done, the main thing that would have made this better is music and better magic effects. Instead of just yellow squiggly lines try experimenting with some blur and glow filters. As for the music, something calm and relaxing would do this great justice.

Score: 10

"Genius!"

submission: Hunt of the Shoopacabra

date: February 11, 2008

I saw the preview you had of this a few months back - actually I was just thinking of that about about an hour ago... Weird. Anyway, brilliant! Very smooth, and an original twist to the Madness series.

I also lol'd when Dad made an appearance - bravo.

Score: 5

"One main thing."

submission: Warrior RPG (beta)

date: February 2, 2008

Battle sequences. If you keep what you have here, but add some sort of graphics to the fighting, you will have something very good. Even something easy, like a Pokemon-style set up would work.

Also add some music, increase the map size, and make it so that you don't restart in the town after every battle..